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July 20, 2008

the final cut

Filed under: matinee muse — ~Kathryn~ @ 1:16 am

there was nothing left
he could not see a way out
his eyes were misted by tears
the blade sharp
the note written
the feelings that he could not express
poured onto the sheets of paper
splattered with blood
he cried
as he made the final cut

again from matinee muse … i didn’t actually read the prompts correctly – but i still enjoyed writing it

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4 Comments »

  1. This is quite powerful! Loaded with dramatic atmosphere!

    Comment by Gemma — July 23, 2008 @ 8:56 pm | Reply

  2. Woah… extremely intense, very gripping interpretation of the MM prompt!

    here’s mine…

    Comment by Rob Kistner — July 25, 2008 @ 2:28 am | Reply

  3. how tragic. very well written.

    here’s mine.

    Comment by rebecca — July 25, 2008 @ 8:14 am | Reply

  4. Very emotional. So sad not the way to go.

    Comment by Jadey — July 25, 2008 @ 12:31 pm | Reply


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