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July 20, 2008

the dark night

Filed under: matinee muse — ~Kathryn~ @ 1:13 am

there was no warning
she closed her eyes as normal
but once she was asleep
the dark night overtook her
her dreams took her places she didn’t want to go
places she didn’t know existed
places that scared her
she was enveloped with fear
she awoke gasping
but
remembered nothing

a play on the “Dark Knight” prompt at matinee muse premiere prompts

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4 Comments »

  1. I liked your play on the prompt. Your poem reminded me of those dreams that when we awake we are only left with the remnants of fear.

    Peace, JP/deb
    Here’s my matinee muse contribution.

    Comment by JanePoet — July 22, 2008 @ 1:27 pm | Reply

  2. Even when you forget the details, you always seem to remember if it was a god or bad dream.

    Comment by stan — July 24, 2008 @ 5:51 pm | Reply

  3. This is engaging and very familiar — we’ve all been there. A great description of ‘night terrors’ in response to the MM prompt.

    here’s mine…

    Comment by Rob Kistner — July 25, 2008 @ 2:33 am | Reply

  4. Those are the dreams I think we all fear the ones we can’t remember yet they leave you wondering what happened. Great post.

    Comment by Jadey — July 25, 2008 @ 12:29 pm | Reply


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