GIVE
Every day i think about it …… every day i think about what i want to say to you, what i want to GIVE to you
i think about what i want in return – i KNOW what it is you can GIVE me !
what i wouldn’t GIVE to be able to be with you
what i wouldn’t GIVE to be able to have all your love
instead i GIVE UP so much to be around you
i GIVE UP my ‘control’ so that you will stay with me – i don’t like it when i do that
if things were different i would GIVE YOU the world
if things were different i would GIVE YOU everything
if things were different i wouldn’t GIVE a damn !!
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That is a good poem, expounding various connotations of GIVE. I would like it better if you had used the capital ‘I’ for the first person singular!!
Comment by Altonian — June 27, 2011 @ 4:11 am |
Hmmm…but maybe the small i fits a purpose here. I like the ending!
Comment by jeanneaguilar — June 28, 2011 @ 2:12 pm |